Hi, This is a little blog post about the corrections that I made for my home learning. One of our home learning is correcting two of our blog post.
One of the blog post that I corrected was the Japanese Occupation of Hong Kong. The changes that I made was details ( like add the dates ) and to separate some of the sentences. Another blog post that I correct was the one about my home learning for others, helping in the kitchen. I turn some of the words past tense and into other words that mean the same thing.
That is what I did for my home learning. Thanks for checking out my blog. Bye!