What changes would you make to improve my logo?
我覺得我的crit A 做的不好，因為我不知道一些中文字。 所以不知道真麼答案問題。我做得好是我的critC和critD因為我想我說的很好但是不可以寫那麼多字。
CRAZY HAIR DAY
FRIDAY, MAY 10 2019
Today it is crazy hair day, I am so happy to see all the cool hairstyles people have. But it is not all about the hair it is also about who we are donating the money to, This DDD we are supporting Feeding HK. Feeding HK is an organization that will get food from supermarkets or stores and will make it for people that can’t pay for that food, for example: people in poverty and refugees. For my crazy hair, I took a gel and whipped it all over my head, But then it all fell during recess and the morning heat. My friend Ryder had the coolest hair with a lego dude on a surfboard surfing his colored hair. There are also many other people that have their hair curled up into a ball to make a cupcake or have wires in their hair so it can go anywhere. Today was one of the most fun days because you could see all the crazy hairs all over the place.
THANKS FOR READING MY FREE WRITING!
This year is a very special year because 1 it is the end of lower school and number 2 we have PYPX.
In the start, I was doing minimal work then I found my topic Food Waste This was just the start when I started researching I found out loads of stuff and got some organizations that people shared with me one of the biggest organization I found was Food Angel. Food Angel is a big organization that will take the leftover food from supermarkets or other stores and cooks it for people that can’t pay for food. I went on a tour at Food Angel and they taught me that about 3,600 tons of food is wasted in HK that taught me that CDNIS can change and bring it to 3,550, The biggest part was learning the 3 landfills will be closing next year and they will have to burn it that will create even more global warming than it already makes and it makes about 4 times as much food waste than transportation. Action for my action I am getting in touch with the CDNIS kitchen confetti and asking if students can have more choice of how much food student get with a maximum and a minimum. In my presentation, I found out that lots and lots of parents thought my wall of posters and graphs where pretty cool on the wall. If you want to help buy more from Food Angels food donors so the food you don’t buy won’t end up in the waste and it is for a good cause, Here is the link http://www.foodangel.org.hk/our_partners.php .
Grade 6 PYPX, This was a great experience to have to research over the year and finally presenting it to parents and students, After seeing my grade and I thought I could have done better, I think when I was sharing my PYP I kept on saying “UM-UM”. I think if I practiced a little more than I would be better at presenting, My grade showed me that my process journal needed a little more work on it in terms of reflections and my learning journey.
This week in learning cohorts I started finishing my emails and now all I need to do is get permission from Mr.Brodie. I discussed the emails I wrote to who and why I am emailing them. The challenges that I faced today was making the emails nice but still getting something out of them. Next learning cohort I should be telling the information I got from the people I emailed.