Name of Peer *
Song Choice *
Identify alternatives and perspectives
Listen or watch your peer’s final recording submission. After listening, read their artistic intention and thought process behind their work. How does what you thought align with theirs? *
We have same thought at what he think about practise and editing. He said that he had to put effort, I think it is important too. I think I also learned more about Garageband which I am strongly agree on his opinion. But, I do not agree on what he said on “I had a strong artistic direction for my final musical audio recording”. He said that he had got comments and I felt good, but I think people wrote him some comments that could be improved, so my wonder is why didn’t he improve more before he felt good and completed?
What interesting, different, or exciting elements did they use that you would be incorporate into yours next time round? *
In his song, the mood was peaceful, more than I did even though I put a lot of effort on it. I want to add that kind of mood next time. I also want to get more feedback before I submit. Because this form is my first feedback and Cameron will going to give be the first feedback, I think that if I got the feedback faster, I may could improved them.
Did the context of the song change through their interpretation? *
Maybe because in the interpretation, it said that he asked Mr.O.Toole and classmate, put a lot of effort in to it and I can see the change that I got from the beginning of the unit and a lot of improvement. But I feel like he could do more better on his recording by editing the recording. I could not see that he had edited some in his text, I think he could be better, but this recording was better than I thought.