我的中文反思

             從開學到現在,我覺得總體來說,我的中文水平不是很好。雖然我的聽、說和讀比較好,但是我的寫作水平很一般。

            加強我的寫作水平有三種方法:首先,我會每天在字典上學三到五個生字,並且把字都寫下來。其次,我會看很多中文書,如果有好詞好句,我就會把那個詞語記錄下來。再次,我每個星期六都會在一小時之內寫完一篇兩百到兩百五十字的作文。寫完作文以後,媽媽就會檢查字詞和語法,然後我再依照媽媽的意見重修修改作文。

           我覺得如果我的一直做好這三樣事情,我的中文水平就可以提高。

           這就是我的中文學習反思。

Camp ⛺️

Camp ⛺️

The attitude I think I have showed is independence because  I didn’t get home sick and I did activities that are on your self really fast. The thing I learned in camp about the world is that it is unfair because in the “game of life” the hunter can just shoot you with a weapon. My favourite part in camp was the barbecue dinner because it was funny when the person next to me picked a super black sausage and a piece of cookie fell in the fire and made it super big. The things that I came over was I was scared of dark but I was not after camp. I really like camp.

I survived story

                                    I survived story

Fred,Bob and Joe are friends since they were very young. They stick together every day. But once they got a deadly mission when they were 30 as a miners!

 

When they were a miner there third mission was to find diamonds, Joe shouted “how are we supposed to find such a rare thing”their boss shouted back “I don’t care JUST GIVE MY LOOT” then suddenly the room was quite…

 

Joe searched online to find information of diamonds suddenly he shouted “I found it” Bob and Fred  was surprised! They looked to the “ALL ABOUT DIAMONDS” part closely to find the location if the diamonds, the diamonds was common under the desert in Egypt. Fred announced “we will head to Egypt tomorrow”.

 

The next day, they got ready for trip, Joe got his compass and a dynamite, Bob got his map and Fred got his pickaxe. They went to the mineshaft and start mining. After 2 days of living in caves they found something weird! They seem to hit something Fred bang on his pickaxe making banging sound “Bang Bang Bang” sounds after sounds then suddenly they hit a cave…

 

They went  in the cave then, suddenly! The sealing start to fall down, many rocks fell down and blocked their mineshaft “we have to get out of here” shouted Bob “but the rocks are fully made of iron it will take days to mine this large wall”

“let’s go find another exit” announced Fred.

So they started walking in the cave days and days and finally they found a exit…

 

It was not a exit but it is the only exit, it was a exit in the desert with sand but more sand. The only help was themself, the rescue team will be lost in this deadly desert, quicksand after quicksand. There was in a desert with no food or water. Bob shouted “this is all Joe’s fault if he still have his compass we will be out already

“Don’t blame me” shouted joe “if you didn’t forget your map, we will still be out mister Bob”

“STOP” shouted as loud as he can to stop to fight “if we don’t work together we will never get out of this desert.” Then something seem to shock Joe “the sun, we can use the sun as a compass” So they started walking towards their mineshaft.

 

When there was really close the mineshaft they suddenly fell in to a chamber of lava and gravel “what are we going to do” Bob shouted as the gravel falling in to the lava “here use my dynamite to blow up the walls the mineshaft is behind that wall” Joe shouted

“How am I going to light it up”Fred shouted

“Use the lava”shouted Joe, after that, all they here was “BOOM” the wall exploded and pieces of gravel formed a bridge like magic,and behind the  walls there was there mineshaft and DIAMONDS “we made it” shouted Fred as they head back home.

Generate, Sort, Connect, Elaborate

Generate, Sort, Connect, Elaborate

I choose this piece because it is the wrap-up of the unit.I learned that you have to be concentrate because I took a long time to finish, but if I concentrate I would be way more faster.I think this shows curiosity because I have many question when I was doing this. Next time when I do some thing like this, I will be more concentrated and write more.

MARSHMALLOW SNOWMAN

MARSHMALLOW SNOWMAN

I choose this piece because it was fun building the snowman with marshmallow and gummy bears! I got improved multiplication and division because try to solve the problem and I didn’t give up.I can now do multiplication and division more independently.I think that showed of confidence because that  if I don’t hove enough confidence I won’t be able to do this.Next time I will be more concentrated finish more faster.

Landform Research

Landform Research

I choose this  piece because I like it really much and I think I did well.I learned that nature can be strong or weak.I think that this piece showed of creativity because I need to create create a picture of a landform and draw it out.Next time  will write  more and gather more information.

seek the tool

I choose this piece  because it is my final draft of the last piece of writing (of the unit)and I think I did well on this piece.I learned that hard work always make good thing happen.I think this showed off independence because I am able to do it on my own with out any help.Next time, I well do better because I only write 11 lines.