新詩自評

簡介:在這個單元裏,除了認識複習具體化的描寫方法以及各種修辭手法,還認識了不同的新詩,例如冰心的《紙船-寄母親》,艾青的《綠》等作品。學習了這些作品,然後就開始創作自己的新詩。而我的作品名叫《思念》,將思念化作不同的景象來抒發對昔日與友人共聚的美好時光的思念以及表達我在內心的掙扎。

自評/反思:我對於自己創作不是太滿意,因為我用了小量的修辭手法,經常用誇張,整首詩好像只有誇張。在選詩方面,這首詩的主題太難了,剛剛起筆寫這作品覺得很容易,可是後來完成後才發現有點不對路,可是又不知道怎麼改正。如果有機會再寫多一次,我會慎重選題,不會好高騖遠,想得清清楚楚才會下筆。

Bird asssignment

We had a Science assignment about birds recently.We have to create our own bird and this is what my bird look like.href=”http://sites.cdnis.edu.hk/students/130297/files/2014/02/Photo-on-16-2-14-at-11.06-PM.jpg”>

I didn’t really follow the teacher’s instructions which we have to draw the bird first,then describe its behaviour and structure.I did it the other way turn but I found that easier.
I did well on describing the behaviour adaptation and structures.I had fully explain how the adaptations were acquired through natural selection.For the drawing,I had fully explain how the environment looks and the characteristics of the bird.I think I should use more scientific vocabulary.Overall,I think I did really well.