I like your first book jacket it shows the book title “When You reach Me”, the staircases makes me want to read the book, because you didn’t give away any spoilers and it seems like you covered up a lot of things. I wish the second one was not that complicate.
I like book jacket number 1 alot more because it is much more detailed. Maybe if you but a bit more effort into it, such as a background color it might have been better. Great job though!
I like the mock up that is black and white, because the stairs match the title, and it fits well together, I also like the items on the stairs, which to me means that maybe these items are important to the story.
I wish there was a little bit more detail though, so that I could get a bit more information from it.
What if, you added colour on a few items, to let them stand out.
I think both of these are too simple, no colour, very very simple. These need more work.
I like the blurb in the back, it makes the book a real mystery and attracts people to read the book and it will make them wonder about what will happen next. (#1 & #2)
I wish you would use colour for the book jacket, it looks really plain and boring.
What if you add a background colour?
for the left one, I like that a shoe is going up the stairs showing that it’s reaching something. For the right one, it doesn’t show much about the story. I’d reccomend something about a letter like an envelope.
I like how you made the various items(shoe, backpack, mailbox) look like a trail, or maybe clues, and I think that matches the theme of when you reach me very much. I wish you added some more detail to your book cover, on the cover and the back, although the simplicity is very nice too. What if you also decided to add some pictures or some sort of design to the back of your book jacket.
I like how the had pictures of the things like the shoes and the mailbox. I like it a lot. I wish you added a background colour to add more contrast. What if changed the way the font for the title looked or was shaped.
I like how you added pins on the board. I wish you put more colour on the wallpaper. What if you changed the board to something else because it looks very empty?
Overall I like mock-up #1 a lot better!
I like book jacket #2 better because of the way you used the board. I wish you had added more colour so that it looked more interesting. What if you added a background colour?
No colour… and very empty. I say both needs work.
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