My PSA

by 100055 on May 3, 2012

For our final assessment on our unit Sharing the Planet about children rights we had to make a Public Service Announcement (PSA). Here is my final PSA after a lot of editing:

 

 

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Avatar of stevebrown Mr. Brown May 11, 2012 at 9:25 pm

Powerful, Es. Statistics mixed with pictures of poor children, throw in some music – you’ve persuaded me!

Avatar of 053517 053517 May 7, 2012 at 1:58 pm

Dear Extreme 13,
I really like the picture and your voice was nice and clear to hear. Nice Job!!

Avatar of 053545 053545 May 7, 2012 at 1:38 pm

The PSA was really good and I liked the music that went with it.

Avatar of 110255 110255 May 7, 2012 at 12:44 pm

I really liked your music and liked the voice that was very effective! I also liked when you said “You can make a difference!” That was effective and motivating!

camper 12 May 7, 2012 at 12:42 pm

I like all the pictures you used through the PSA which blended while you were talking.

Extreme 11! May 7, 2012 at 10:15 am

Extreme 13,
I really liked the music you used and I think it was great when you used a dramatic voice which made it sound like what is happening in the world is horrible and that we have to get rid of it immediately, which we do. Also, I like the end, when it read: “Please help these poor children by informing people and donating money to organizations. You can make a difference!” That was very powerful.

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