Hermann's Blog

It's me. This blog is just like me. AWESOMELY AWESOME!

  • Home
    • Goals
  • PYP
    • UOI
      • How the world works
      • How we express ourselves
      • How we organize ourselves
      • Sharing the planet
      • Where we are in place and time
      • Who we are
    • Chinese
    • Literacy
    • Mathematics
    • Performing Arts
    • PSPE
    • Visual Arts
  • MYP
    • Careers
      • Cover Letter
    • Design
    • Drama
    • Individuals and Societies
    • Language and Literature
    • Language Aquisition
    • Mathematics
    • Music
      • Performance in Music
      • Time, Place, and Space
    • Personal Project
    • Physical and Health Education
    • Sciences
    • Service and Action
    • Visual Art
  • DP
    • CAS
    • EE
    • TOK
  • ATL
    • Communication Skills
    • Research Skills
    • Self Management Skills
    • Social Skills
    • Thinking Skills
  • Learner Profile

You are here :

Home »

Music »

Final Composition Comments Post

Final Composition Comments Post

Hermann     19 March 2015     Music, MYP, Suppose to Compose     8 Comments

Related Posts

image-1257

Music 24 bar composition draft for comment

image-1236

Recorded Scales: 3 Melodic and 3 Harmonic Minor – Feb

image-1229

8 bar composition

8 Comments Already

Subscribe to comments feed
  1. Henrique Carneiro Zhu - March 19th, 2015 at 13:36

    Overall I like your composition. It has a very nice tune that sounds nice and is very well matched with the piano. The rhythm is also very nice, with variations and also some repetitiveness. I would improve the simplicity of the composition though, as it’s not very playable at the moment.

    Reply
  2. Kristie Leung - March 19th, 2015 at 13:36

    I think that there is a nice melody on the mallets part and a good use of dynamics. However, I think that there should be have more of a variety of rhythm because it was quite repetitive through out the piece. I also think that it might have been too fast for a mallet player to play. Also, I think that you might want to add a counter melody on the piano part to make the piece more interesting. 🙂

    Reply
  3. Harry Cheon - March 19th, 2015 at 13:36

    The rhythmic balance in the composition is questionable because you have a lot of sixteenth and eighth notes. I liked you melody though. Your chords aren’t labeled throughout the piece and I think that is going to cost you a lot.

    Reply
  4. 120053 - March 19th, 2015 at 13:36

    You used a variety of rhythm in your piece. You used a lot of dynamics in your piece. Maybe changing the volume of your piano part, because it is kind of covering the mallets part. I like how you used slurs in your piece to change the articulation and connecting the notes together. The melody is nice and it flows well.

    Reply
  5. Nicholas - March 19th, 2015 at 13:35

    No title. Very simple use of chords but they key change is apparent and fits. Does not seem to have an apparent melody; perhaps the chords are a bit too loud. Semi-consistent rhythmic and melodic balance. Many of your chords are not labelled.

    Reply
  6. 053449 - March 19th, 2015 at 13:35

    Lots of dynamics, but you used too much, so it’s notes effective as just using less. Nice Chords, didn’t match melody though. Good effort

    Reply
  7. 043032 - March 19th, 2015 at 13:35

    No chord figures. Good use of crescendos and expressions, but only for primary instrument. lack of slurs. Accompaniment covers melody. Interesting melody.

    Reply
  8. Jamie Baek - March 19th, 2015 at 13:35

    You used a variety of rhythms and the melody is creative. You could have improved by putting more variety to the piano part, and labelling the cadence. You could have also put the title to set up the mood and the overall theme for your composition. There are variety of dynamics and articulations.

    Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

CAPTCHA Image
Refresh Image

*

« Music 24 bar composition draft for comment
Music Reflection: May Reflections (playing test, theory test, whole year) »

Follow Us

  •  

     

     

5E-Extra-Terresstrials!!!

  • ET01
  • ET02
  • ET03
  • ET04
  • ET05
  • ET06
  • ET07
  • ET08
  • ET09
  • ET10
  • ET11
  • ET12
  • ET13
  • ET14
  • ET15
  • ET16
  • ET17
  • ET18
  • ET19
  • ET20
  • ET21
  • ET22
  • ET23
free counters

How many people

snow plows for sale

Who is looking?

Make your own pet!


adopt your own virtual pet!

My #2 pet on net


adopt your own virtual pet!

Recent Posts

  • TOK 11-1 Mar 30
  • TOK 11-1 Mar 13 Blogpost
  • TOK 11-1 Mar 7 Blogpost
  • TOK 11-1 Feb 20
  • TOK 11-1 Nov 28 Blogpost

Recent Comments

  • Jonathan - I'd love to read a bit more about your experiences...
  • Henrique Carneiro Zhu - Overall I like your composition. It has a very nic...
  • Kristie - I think that there is a nice melody on the mallets...
  • Harry Cletton Cheon - The rhythmic balance in the composition is questio...
  • Nicole - You used a variety of rhythm in your piece. You us...

Hot Topics

  •  (23)
  • Grade 8 Music Composition (13)
  • Final Composition Comments Post (8)
  • Grade 8 melody (7)
  • Masters of War Reflection (4)

About Us

Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetuer adipiscing elit. Sed odio nibh, tincidunt adipiscing, pretium nec, tincidunt id, enim...Read more

Copyright © 2019. Hermann's Blog
Skip to toolbar
  • Log in