I have decided, after listening back to my melody a few times, to revise the 8-bar melody found in this post.
A few of my revisions include:
- Adding the labels for passing notes and neighbour tones
- Changing dynamics to fit with the rise and fall of notes better
- Changing dynamics in the piano part to be quieter
- Removing and lengthening notes in the piano part so that it no longer overpowers the flute in its melody
- Correcting bar formatting so that notes are easier to see
- Adding in ‘leading’ notes to lead into the next bars with a smoother transition