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Avatar of 100300 Emerie March 10, 2014 at 11:49 AM

no dynamics but the melody was good and the composition suited the title. Have a bit more variety.


Avatar of 053461 053461 March 10, 2014 at 11:48 AM

It had a great rhythm with good conjunct and disjunct.


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