8 Bar Rhythm

This is my 8 Bar rhythm. Please feel free to comment on what you liked and what you think I can improve on.


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  1. I think that your 8 Bar Rhythm is flowing except for the last bar (your ending). Perhaps you could not end that with a rest, instead ending it with a long note? Also, try not to use so many 16th notes.

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